Taking into consideration of our first feedback from our peers and teachers, we showed the same group of people and more developed film to get even more feedback in order to perfect our film.
The feedback received this time around was the following:
- In the final shot of the film, the soundtrack appears to be very quiet. After re-watching the opening, I completely agree. To resolve this, I will make the music louder and also make sure it is consistent throughout.
- Another piece of feedback we got was to sort out the in and out fading of the establishing shots at the start of the opening. Our teacher suggested that we should have the fades on for longer; this is something we will work on in the next lesson.
- The final piece of feedback was to make sure the 180′ rule is perfect and applied correctly in our film opening. Some shots need to be edited so the characters do not look like they are walking in different directions and standing in different positions than they were before.
Taking these final notes of feedback should see our film be completed and we shall now act upon them and aim to get our film finished by the end of the week.