Script 1.1

After recieving feedback from script 1.0 we have now altered our script: screen-shot-2016-12-01-at-14-59-11.pngscreen-shot-2016-12-01-at-14-59-24.png

The updated script was an improvement on the last but didn’t fail to still raise concerns. Our teacher was concerned about was the part where the protagonist digs into the ground with his bare hands. To overcome this, we have decided that he will dig with the knife so we will make a final change to that so, our script can be fully completed.


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