After looking at all the conventions of writing a screen play, we started to write our script for our film. Here it is below:
The feedback received from peers and teachers was mainly positive as they commended the format that the script takes and how professional looking it is. From the feedback we also received areas of improvements and will now alter and change the script. These include that there should either be more action or dialogue in the film to give it more depth.
In conclusion, it was a good first attempt of writing a script.